tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8860756387286116954.post2271889189504717850..comments2023-06-16T10:47:33.287-04:00Comments on My Blog Can Beat Up Your Blog: JustLancehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/02421199592104616785noreply@blogger.comBlogger10125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8860756387286116954.post-37526105345029362812011-05-19T14:48:38.301-04:002011-05-19T14:48:38.301-04:00Nice. Love the dialog. It's all so immediate.Nice. Love the dialog. It's all so immediate.Jonah Gibsonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15718378638626020770noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8860756387286116954.post-29676947879938587292011-05-17T19:15:41.899-04:002011-05-17T19:15:41.899-04:00Ava is starting to scare me...Ava is starting to scare me...Tara R.https://www.blogger.com/profile/02993625193184914299noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8860756387286116954.post-23440105888703361782011-05-17T14:51:53.042-04:002011-05-17T14:51:53.042-04:00Fuck yes. (all caught up now) (promise not to fal...Fuck yes. (all caught up now) (promise not to fall behind again) (pardon my French)<br /><br />So good, Lance. And, yeah. I want to pop Ava right in the face.Jen O.http://mytornadoalley.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8860756387286116954.post-47450147196758558592011-05-17T14:11:40.293-04:002011-05-17T14:11:40.293-04:00I call shenanigans on Ava, but I love a villain.
...I call shenanigans on Ava, but I love a villain.<br /><br />I liked the rhythm of this one. A lot.CDG @ Move Over Mary Poppins!http://moveovermarypoppins.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8860756387286116954.post-45252481469224480432011-05-17T12:07:33.422-04:002011-05-17T12:07:33.422-04:00I don't think I have ever hated a fictional ch...I don't think I have ever hated a fictional character as much as I hate Ava. If Breann turns out to be "female" too, I will be devastated.Maasiyathttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12335479646687529836noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8860756387286116954.post-49759454782822211722011-05-17T09:04:14.968-04:002011-05-17T09:04:14.968-04:00I'm totally with Hed on this one. To have to t...I'm totally with Hed on this one. To have to trust and rely on a woman that feels rejected by you multiple times?? Not a smart thing to do Caleb! Loving this story!Random Girlhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05494483624821880838noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8860756387286116954.post-59334833401112664352011-05-17T08:21:22.055-04:002011-05-17T08:21:22.055-04:00Hmmm...I still think she's evil even if you di...Hmmm...I still think she's evil even if you did give her a nice background...hell hath no fury like a woman scorned, am I right?<br /><br />hedhedhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08238318473453113791noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8860756387286116954.post-41517710820608652762011-05-17T07:36:06.597-04:002011-05-17T07:36:06.597-04:00You have a terrific way of giving characters both ...You have a terrific way of giving characters both depth and dimension. Excellent chapter.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8860756387286116954.post-9177710124272388312011-05-17T06:43:40.707-04:002011-05-17T06:43:40.707-04:00@Mollie i agree and done@Mollie i agree and doneLancehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02421199592104616785noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8860756387286116954.post-70285937136430069612011-05-17T06:41:09.533-04:002011-05-17T06:41:09.533-04:00Unsolicited Suggestion? Change the word 'face&...Unsolicited Suggestion? Change the word 'face' in the first paragraph to 'skin'. <br /><br /><br />I had the craziest moment where I thought Ava had morning breath while reading that sentence.OKinUKhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03555273626929715243noreply@blogger.com